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Sunday, December 27: The A.D.D. Detective

CHRISTMAS CONTEST FINISH LINE

by Leigh Lundin

Except for announcements of finalists and post-game analysis, our Christmas contest concluded at midnight GMT. In two parts, this Sunday and next, I’ll explain how the contest came to be created and how it was solved.

The Seedgift book

The idea for the puzzle derived from two sources. In June, I reported about l’Oulipo, the French writing project, one of our clues that referred to things French. Oulipo spoke about ‘constrained writing’, which creates works with constraints or rules, such as lipograms. Proponents such as Thomas Pynchon claim constrained writing makes for better writers. I can’t vouch for that, but limitation rules prove challenging and fun to work around, a puzzle in itself. An author becomes more conscious of word choices, turn of phrases, and tightening text.

The other impetus originated within a computer science cryptography assignment. Dr. Paul Abrahams once dismissed class for the winter break by handing students a solid block of incomprehensible text, telling them it contained a Christmas message.

My girlfriend was in the same class. We sat on the floor that winter, taking the text apart. I like lateral thinking, the ability to look at problems obliquely, sometimes helpful in puzzle solving. I remember the moment the eureka solution struck– or dumbstruck. Usually, I sent my professor a Chanukah card but that holiday I rushed to find a card with the same message. I think Judy and I were the only students to crack the code.

Seeds and Sowers

Following the Oulipo article, I began to think about merging the two concepts in creating a Christmas puzzle for our readers, combining Dr. Abraham’s challenge with lipograms. With the idea still in its infancy, I floated the idea of a collaborative puzzle to my colleagues.

John is always enthusiastic about new ideas. He immediately joined in and along with Rob, suggested offering books as prizes, quickly echoed by Deborah who first raised the idea of anthologies.

Rob became our contingency planner, our what-if executive, thinking ahead to unforeseen problems the rest of us haven’t yet considered. Steve contributed in that regard, too, lending gentle humor when it was most needed. He became our anthology editor.

Under Way

The game progressed from a puzzle to a contest. James took the administrative reins, formulating rules and coordinating the project. His shouldering that burden allowed me to focus on the puzzle itself.

James blew the rest of us away by custom designing an anthology as the prize and then negotiating for rights to the included stories. James also arranged for Angela and Melodie to join us, making all eight original bloggers a part of the project.

Text, Context, Subtext

During puzzle week, many of our columns offer clues on two levels: (a) the essential puzzle clue and (b) clues to the clue. For example: The first article that describes the rules contains a clue to the message. Additionally, the items listed under the heading Chanukah Gifts contain a tool to help in decoding the puzzle and hints what to look for.

Although we specify clues to the message won’t be found in the footnotes, the very presence of footnotes suggests an indirect hint. In other words, if we wanted to discuss a topic that didn’t fit the parameters of our puzzle, we buried it in a footnote.

Thus, each column contains the message clue and many articles contain additional clues suggesting what to focus on. For example, the title of Rob’s article about the Nigerian scam is a bonus clue. That kind of cleverness underscores the team effort. While James urged me to take a bow for starting the project, planting the seed was all I did. The brilliance came from ideas everyone tossed into the circle.

In the limericks article, one of the ditties provides a clue to the clue, simultaneously linking to the Oulipo article and hinting at the French origins of the message itself. Nowhere in the article can you find the word ‘limerick’, another (albeit indirect) hint.

In my opinion, the cleverest second level clue came from James’ article from Silver Blaze about the dog in the night. I thought I advanced the cause by providing a link to The Adventure of the Dancing Men, but James’ clue was more subtle and useful as well as bloody sly. In other words, look (or listen) for something that isn’t there. Combined with Rob’s clue…

Footholddecorating the tree

When I persuaded others to join me in my madness, I sketched an outline of what I proposed without revealing the mechanism and message. Rob shocked me by guessing the answer out of the box. Prior to Rob’s feat, I worried about the puzzle being too difficult. After Rob’s leap of deduction, I fretted it would prove too easy.

That last, it was not. I sought feedback along the way and the most common concern was finding a place to get a toehold. Where does one start? As the game moved to its second week, Rob suggested additional hints to help readers narrow their focus. I opened that Sunday suggesting solvers look for two things: commonalities between articles and anything uncommon. It’s a credit to my colleagues that no one seemed to notice unusual wording. James continued offering hints through the week as the game neared the finish line.

The Impact

We received support from Women of Mystery and Bill Crider. Privately, I hoped one of their members or readers might snag a prize. Ellery Queen and Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazines also lent support to our efforts.

To my knowledge, Criminal Brief became the first blog to attempt a puzzle of this order. We might also have been the first to create a lipogrammatic blog. Whether or not the experiment proved successful, we made a silly little bit of history thanks to the team efforts of colleagues inside and outside Criminal Brief and our loyal readers.

I want to thank Deborah, John, Steve, Rob, and James for all their work and suggestions. All of us thank Melodie and Angela for contributing thoughts and stories for the anthology. Thanks to Terrie Moran and the gang at Women of Mystery. Finally, to our readers, thank you for your support and hard work.

Next Week

One of our readers wrote reams of notes as she worked on the puzzle. Next week, I’ll bring you a story behind the story. You’ll be amazed.

In the meantime, check in Monday to learn the results.

Posted in The A.D.D. Detective on December 27th, 2009
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11 comments

  1. December 27th, 2009 at 5:31 am, Loretta Craig Says:

    I like the intrigue behind this phase of articles. Nicely done!
    Loretta

  2. December 27th, 2009 at 5:23 pm, Terrie Farley Moran Says:

    Wonderful job by all the CBers and I wish great joy to the winners!

    Terrie

  3. December 27th, 2009 at 6:31 pm, Jeff Baker Says:

    Wow! This is all amazing! I love puzzle stories and the story-behind the story is a puzzle story in itself. I can’t imagine trying to write a blog entry that would incorporate a zlue (Zoinks!) Can’t wait to see the ending!

  4. December 27th, 2009 at 6:32 pm, Jeff Baker Says:

    Uh, that should be “clue!” (But I’m keeping that word “zlue…”)

  5. December 27th, 2009 at 7:22 pm, JLW Says:

    The winners will be announced tomorrow, not Tuesday.

  6. December 27th, 2009 at 10:04 pm, Leigh Says:

    Jeff, if you had said “czue”, you’d have been dead on!

  7. December 27th, 2009 at 10:07 pm, Leigh Says:

    I meant to add that if you combine James’ clue about the dog in the night (looking– or listening– for something that is not there) and Rob’s clue about the letter from Santa, the penny will start to drop.

  8. December 28th, 2009 at 2:25 am, Deborah Says:

    Actually, I thought I had given a rather deliberate clue in my column, but as of yet not a single person has commented on it. Interesting. Very interesting. :-)

  9. December 28th, 2009 at 2:50 am, JLW Says:

    I got it, Deborah. Very whimsical, if I may say so, too.

  10. December 28th, 2009 at 4:51 am, Rob Lopresti Says:

    YOu know, Deb, in my clue that James ran yesterday I did note that you deliberately left out the name of A Christmas Carol and Rudolph the RNR, but I forgot to mention It’s A Wonderful Life and Dorothy Sayers. Bad on me. They were all good clues in a lovely piece.

  11. December 30th, 2009 at 8:53 am, Leigh Says:

    I thought the title of Deborah’s previous column, Seasoned Characters, would have made a great clue.

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