Saturday, February 20: Mississippi Mud
WRITE WHAT YOU LIKE
by John M. Floyd
Throughout the sixteen years of my so-called career as a writer, one of the pieces of advice I’ve heard most often is write what you know. And I agree with that, at least in theory. The more familiar you are with a subject, the more believable you’re likely to be. I’m sure one reason John Grisham’s novels are successful is the time he spent working in the same field as many of his characters, and the same might be said of Robin Cook, Kathy Reichs, Joseph Wambaugh, Dick Francis, and many others.
But I don’t think writers should feel bound to the “write what you know” rule. I believe a much better version of that advice is: write what you like to write, and what you like to read, and what you feel comfortable writing. In my opinion, good fiction is a product more of imagination than personal experience. Remember, Tom Clancy was an insurance salesman; he never even served in the military. And Rob mentioned in his column a few weeks ago the German author Karl May, who wrote most of his stories about the riproaring Old West but never set foot there.
The Walter Mitty syndrome
The problem with writing only about what you know is that many of us haven’t lived lives that are interesting or exciting enough to sustain a piece of fiction, and certainly a piece of suspense fiction. Maybe that’s what drove Clancy and May to stretch their horizons a bit. Marie Anderson once said, in an article for The Writer, “I used to write what I know. I used to write about infertility, motherhood, suburban middle-class life, blue-collar Catholic childhood, law school from a dropout’s perspective. I’d send out those stories and never see them again, not even the SASEs. Then, somewhere, I came across a better rule: Know what you write.”
What kinds of things do I know, to write about? Well, I’m pretty familiar with the South, and marriage and parenthood, and certain hobbies and sports, and the Air Force and IBM and some areas of computer technology. And my travels in the military and with my job have helped a little, I suppose. But the truth is, I’ve probably written more fiction about places I haven’t visited than those I have, and I’ve written relatively few stories that deal with familiar career subjects like financial applications and software design. What I do do, now and then, is start a story with something that I know and then detour into areas a little more foreign — and almost certainly more interesting.
Beyond this point there be tygers
Examples? Well, I’ve written and published stories about or including the following subjects: serial killers, time machines, park rangers, ghosts, UFO sightings, cattle drives, jewelry heists, terrorists, convents, political campaigns, alien invasions, rock bands, murder for hire, mountain climbing, carnivals, gunfighters, online dating services, insurance fraud, Bengal tigers, disc jockeys, space travel, arson, the Civil War, animal research, exotic poisons, angels, locked-room murders, hypnotism, escaped pythons (snakes on a plain?), death rays, railroads, bounty hunters, the Alaskan wilderness, jailbreaks, night watchmen, bomb squads, oil barons, Japanese detectives, police corruption, castaways, stagecoach robberies, scuba diving, axe-murders, England in the early 1900s, monsters, mobsters, ocean liners, the Alamo, casino gambling, and futuristic lie detectors.
As you might guess, few of those topics were familiar to me, beforehand. What I needed to know I learned from others, or from reference books and maps and online resources. With the proper research, what you don’t know can become what you know. The very fact that you’ve increased your comfort level with a particular subject can improve the quality and flow of your writing.
Sometimes, though . . .
Sometimes you can tapdance your way through difficult subject matter without having to reveal a lot of in-depth knowledge. Do your best, certainly; research the facts, be as credible as you can . . . but don’t obsess too much about it.
I’ll close with a quote I think I used once in an earlier column: According to Lawrence Block, “Ninety-eight percent of your readers won’t know whether the information is accurate or not, and the rest won’t care.”
Write what you know? My advice is, write what you know you’ll enjoy writing.
John,
“Write what you know” reminds me that last week when I spoke at a book club, one of the members said she reads mostly non fiction about hobbies she enjoys like sailing and hiking.
She mentioned that since, in the books she reads, the authors are mostly talking about their own life experience, she really wonders about mystery writers!!
Terrie
I agree with you, John. The pure pleasure of writing is slipping into the skin of a character whose experience is very different from one’s own. The external details–setting, work experience, etc.–are easy enough to research. I once heard Stuart Kaminsky say in an interview that he’d never been to Russia, but you wouldn’t know that from his Rostnikov novels.
I loved this article!
It made me laugh remembering when I first started writing it was in romance and then and since (because I still edit/proof for some); when I was told that, and then after reading some of their books I really thought my marriage would be on the rocks! MY GOSH!!! Woo Wee….write what you KNOW?
Then I realized we all have an extraordinary imagination.
Sometimes I think there are interests that go beyond what we know but we like. Such as those you mentioned.
I have an interest in serial killers. I know nothing about being a serial killer and I personally don’t own a gun, or knife, or anything dangerous (except a cell phone).
I really am curious about their minds. I can’t seem to “get there” to truly understand the evil. Not sure I want to either!
Great article and good advice to writers who are starting out.
Great article, John. I agree — to a point. No one has encountered aliens in space (in the middle of a cornfield maybe, but so far none out there in space), but we read about this in wonderful books all the time. BUT, I do think if you write about Dallas, you’d better know where those streets are and how those accents differ from those in Mississippi or New Orleans. (Who Dat!)
You are correct, Deborah. One writer I talked with recently told me he spends a lot of time on Google Maps when he writes about cities he visited in years past. You want to make sure the buildings you describe as being on the corner of Fifth and Main haven’t turned into an amusement park since your last visit there.
One way to get around that, though, is to set your story in the year you WERE there. Hey, when you’re the author you’re the head fred. Ain’t it good to be the king??