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Thursday, June 14: Femme Fatale

BEING DIFFERENT

by Deborah Elliott-Upton

I love writing exercises, especially the “what if” questions. At the Frontiers in Writing conference this past weekend, I attended Melanie Rigney’s “Creative Corner” sessions. I had no idea what the workshop would involve, but I love Melanie’s free spirit mingled with her sharp editor’s mind.

As Melanie’s conference host, I attended this class twice and admit I cheated. We were to pair off with a partner we did not know well. The first time I chose Karl Smith, a soft-spoken man who writes beautiful poetry and for the second, I grabbed Jeff Campbell, a cowboy/detective/mystery writer.

Melanie placed torn-from-magazine pages over a large table and asked us each to pick one. Both times I chose the same photo of a beautiful, young redhead wearing spike heels. In mid-twirl, she was not so much dressed as engulfed in a grayish-black fur. The lining peeking through was plaid. The coat may have been the only clothing she wore and swirled around her like she was being swallowed by the furry, black and white plaid monster. Melanie then instructed us to write the opening sentence to a novel inspired by the photograph. Mine was:

The dress code would never be the same after Giselle became school superintendent.

The second part of the exercise was trading photos with your partner and writing the ending sentence to their story (and all this while not knowing what they had written for their opening sentence.) I don’t remember word-for-word either Karl’s or Jeff’s endings to my story and I would not want to misquote them, but they were good, although quite different from each other. Melanie mentioned when we think of a time when we felt different, it isn’t always a negative. Sometimes, being different is a good thing. It’s why Mickey Spillane’s mysteries are different from Raymond Chandler or Bill Pronzini or Clark Howard or even Deborah Elliott-Upton.

Will I write the story suggested by the magazine photo? Who knows? The whole idea is to surprise the mind and excite the Muse by creating something on the spur of the moment. I’ve warned Melanie I am stealing her idea for my own classes. She didn’t mind and even presented me with the prompts. Right now, the redheaded, fur-loving woman is tacked on the wall next to my computer, daring me to take chances with being different.

Walking away with new ideas and tools is partly why writers attend such conferences. Networking is number one, but discovering ways to become a better writer is critical to keep the writing fresh. (For those who are interested, drop by my web site to read my article on Risky Writing.)

After the conference, there are always new books to read by authors we meet. I’m adding Barry Eisler to my booklist. I enjoy meeting burgeoning mystery writers like Katy Britten (someday everyone will know her name, but I am on the ground floor as a Katy fan.) The past few years I have added Michael Bracken, Sunny Frazier and Robert S. Levinson to my growing list of authors to read. I met Michael at a Mystery Writers of America conference and Sunny and Robert online. Knowing them and reading their work has made a difference in my life.

So, I’m wondering, what makes you different? Warning: Be prepared. I just may steal a story idea from your answer.

Posted in Femme Fatale on June 14th, 2007
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9 comments

  1. June 14th, 2007 at 7:36 pm, Lissa Says:

    I think all writers must feel a little ‘different’ from the pack sometimes. That’s what makes it possible for us to see things to write about! SO, who is Katy Britten? Does she write about murder like you do?? :]]

  2. June 14th, 2007 at 7:37 pm, Lissa Says:

    OH, and when can we see this ‘picture’?? I’d love to put it with your sentence in my mind!!

  3. June 14th, 2007 at 7:44 pm, Travis Erwin Says:

    What makes me different?

    THis is an easy for me. Much to Debbie’s chagrin, I am a man, a big hairy man on top of that, who writes Women’s Fiction.

  4. June 14th, 2007 at 8:40 pm, Deborah Says:

    Lissa, because of copyright laws, you will have to picture the photo in your mind. (I think we all have enough imagination for this.) And yes, Katy is a mystery writer and a poet (among other things) and too darn pretty for her own good. And Travis, your women’s fiction is great. It’s just that your Man’s fiction is even better.

  5. June 15th, 2007 at 1:50 am, Leigh Says:

    So, um… is Katy Britten smitten? Er, single?

  6. June 15th, 2007 at 2:24 am, Connie Krenning Says:

    It is amazing how you are able to take a picture, a sign, or a comment and make a complete, exciting story out of it. “You” could turn an icecream cone into a weapon:)
    Perhaps it is secretly loaded with metal spikes….. I have to admire your imagination and talent!

  7. June 15th, 2007 at 3:10 am, Melanie Says:

    Thanks for the nice words! And I hope we see more of Giselle.

    It’s funny… I recently said to a group of women that I’ve always been an outsider, the youngest, the oldest, the one who wasn’t married, the one who was married, the one without kids, the tallest, etc., etc. Not necessarily a bad thing, just different. I think looking for the common bond with someone makes us connect with people… and ultimately makes us better, more curious, more reader-centric writers.

  8. June 15th, 2007 at 11:09 pm, Deborah Says:

    Giselle lives! I have a feeling she is not going to be sitting quietly in the corner knitting. Perhaps she is buying a lethal ice cream cone right about now.

  9. June 17th, 2007 at 9:37 pm, alisa Says:

    I catch up reading this site on the weekend. I love those types of exercises and am very sorry I missed the conference. I don’t think I am different than some writers, but I tend to write by the seat of my pants so to speak. I keep everything in my head and then when I do sit down and write, it just all spills out and I can get many pages down lickety split (is that a real term?) :-)

    By the way, I’d grab Jeff Campbell up quickly too! LOL

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