Sunday, February 01: The A.D.D. Detective
Ask OXFORD
by Leigh Lundin
The words ‘Oxford’ and ‘free’ aren’t normally seen in the same sentence, so when I saw Oxford University Press was sponsoring an Ask Oxford web site, that got my attention. It has a number of useful articles for writers (and readers), but today I focus on their Commonly Confused Words.
My friend Micheline said that in French, it’s the "little words" that trip me up. The same can be said in English. Exotic words stick to my brain like lint on velvet, but once in a while, I need to be reminded how to use the ordinary. I found Oxford’s reminders about may or might and which or that useful. For the latter, I try to remember that a comma is usually found in the vicinity of which, but not that.
In helping others edit, I see other words confused. Recently, writer Loretta Craig expressed frustration an editor changed a sentence, "the woman’s musk permeated the room," substituting the word ‘must’ for ‘musk’. I suppose it was possible her must engulfed the room, but that wasn’t what the writer intended.
Below, I’ve included much of the Ask Oxford list, but added a few of my own that I see commonly misused. And please, tell us of other verbal bugbears, expecially exceptionable principle uncensured creditable words that effect a complaisant writer likely to forego editing a grizzly storey better left interned.
- adapt / adopt
- Adapt means to ‘repurpose’, to alter, adjust, or modify for a new purpose. Adopt means to take on, accept, assume an idea, principle, report, book, or a child or pet.
- affect / effect
- affect means ‘make a difference to’, whereas effect means ‘a result’ or ‘bring about (a result)’.
- auger / augur
- augur, ‘be a sign of (a likely outcome)’, with auger (a tool used for boring).
- capital / capitol
- Capital refers to importance, wealth, upper case letters, and the death penalty. Capitol refers to the temple of Jupiter in Rome and the seat of Congress in Washington.
- censure / censor
- Censure means ‘express strong disapproval of’, whereas censor means ‘suppress unacceptable parts of (a book, film, etc.)’.
- complacent / complaisant
- Complacent means ‘smug and self-satisfied’, while complaisant means ‘willing to please’.
- continuous / continual
- Continuous primarily means ‘without interruption’, and can refer to space as well as time, as in "the cliffs form a continuous line along the coast." Continual, on the other hand, typically means ‘happening frequently, with intervals between’, as in "the bus service has been disrupted by continual breakdowns."
- credible / creditable
- Credible means ‘believable, convincing’, whereas creditable means ‘deserving acknowledgement and praise’.
- draft / draught
- In British English draft means ‘a preliminary version’ or ‘an order to pay a sum’, whereas a draught is a current of air or an act of drinking; in North American English the spelling draft is used for all senses. The verb is usually spelled draft.
- exceptionable / exceptional
- Exceptionable means ‘open to objection; causing disapproval or offence’, while exceptional implies ‘not typical’ or ‘unusually good’).
- faun / fawn
- A fawn is a young deer, and a light brown colour; a faun is a Roman deity that is part man, part goat.
- forego / forgo
- Forego means ‘precede’, but is also a less common spelling for forgo, ‘go without’.
- grisly / grizzly
- Grisly means ‘causing horror or revulsion’, whereas grizzly (the bear) is from the same root as grizzled and refers to the bear’s white-tipped fur.
- interment / internment[1]
- Interment refers to burial. Internment refers to incarceration, confinement.
- loath / loathe
- Loath means ‘reluctant; unwilling’, while loathe means ‘dislike greatly’.
- luxuriant / luxurious
- Luxuriant is ‘rich and profuse in growth’, whereas luxurious means ‘characterized by luxury; very comfortable and extravagant’.
- may / might
- ‘May have’ should be used only when you are not sure whether or not something happened. If you want to say that at some time in the past it was possible for something to happen but in fact it did not, use ‘might have’. So saying "an accident in which two people may have drowned" implies that you do not know whether the people are alive or dead; if you say "two people might have drowned," you are implying that they survived, although the accident could in other circumstances have led to their deaths.
- musk / must
- Musk is usually associated with female scent or perfume (except for the male musk deer). Must refers to fermentation, mold, or decay, or the frenzied state of certain male animals.
- perspicuous / perspicacious
- Perspicuous is ‘expressing things clearly’, but perspicacious means ‘having a ready understanding of things’.
- story / storey
- A story is a tale or account, while a storey is a floor of a building. In North America the spelling story is sometimes used for storey.
- titillate / titivate
- Titillate means ‘excite’, whereas titivate means ‘adorn or smarten up’.
- tortuous / torturous
- Tortuous means ‘full of twists and turns’ or ‘excessively lengthy and complex’, but torturous means ‘characterized by pain or suffering’.
- which / that
- The key is whether you, or the person you are talking to, already know what it is you are talking about. In the sentence "I’ve lost the book that I was reading yesterday," that introduces information that the listener needs in order to know what book is being talked about. You can also say "I’ve lost the book which I was reading yesterday." In ‘This book, which I bought yesterday, is very interesting’, which tells the listener something new about a book that has already been identified. You shouldn’t use that in sentences of this kind.
The Publishing Industry
Traditional book businesses have been facing a rough time with fewer and smaller independent stores, fewer people reading, the advent of eBooks, and an onslaught of self-publishers. As if that wasn’t enough, they have to deal with a tanking economy.
A Salon article poses questions about the situation, but there’re a couple of lights on the horizon. One is that Stephenie Meyer‘s Twilight series has taken teen girls (and others) by storm, however much it leaves us wishing already suffering boys could be induced to pick up a book.
Yet another positive in these perceived hours of doom and gloom is that we have a reader in the White House. There may be hope for us yet.
[1] Fran Rizer in her Callie Parrish series reminds readers to distinguish between the often confused interment and internment.
complement/compliment
uninterested / disinterested
The former means being not intellectually interested; the latter means not having a vested interest.
Let’s not forget “taut” and “taunt.” I learned that lesson at age seventeen from an editor who accepted my manuscript, but wrote me a three page letter explaining the mistake and all its misuses.
Thank you, Leigh, for showing the cover of my latest Callie Parrish mystery. Originally entitled Rub a Dub Dub, Dead Man in a Tub, my new editor changed the name to Casket Case, which at first glance, appears to be a simple rhyming switch of the first word.
In reality, morticians used to use baskets both to transport corpses and sometimes for burial. The expression “basket case” came to mean a hopelessness, might as well be ready for the basket (coffin). A basket case might as well be dead. The switch to Casket in Casket Case relates to the original meaning of Basket Case
Great list. I’m going to save this for future reference.
As far as writing and being a writer. I place Leigh up there with novelist John Updike. Both men with a writing style and discipline that speaks for itself. Crack that whip and get your readers attention! You do it well Leigh…very well!
Leigh,
This is a great list.
Regarding musk and must. The editor’s correction is funny and infuriating. But also a hint that maybe the word perfume should have been added after the word musk to the sentence. I mean she could have walked in the room with a musk.
Alisa,
LOL comment.
Why Melodie, I feel like such an ox!
Loretta Craig! Wow. Thank you. I’m humbled.
James, that is an insidious example.
Hey, Travis and alisa! How are my favorite Texans doin’?
Fran, I enjoyed Casket Case. Other readers did, too, since B&N couldn’t keep it on the shelf. I’m not going to be able to picture Callie without her inflatables!
Leigh, you’ll be impossible to live with from now on, won’t you?
Dick, I’ll expect Steve to rib me: “Eh, what’s updike?”
Good list of word confusions. When I was teaching, I always jumped on my students when they used that instead of who when referring to a person. They’d never use which referring to a person. How about flaunt and flout?
Also wistful, meaning full of longing, and whimsical, playfully capricious.
Others that people may have difficulty with (one hinted at in the article) are
* principle / principal
* stationary / stationery
* venal / venial
* askance / askew
I have trouble with “dems” and “dos.”